Awsome poem Jonny! It is great. I did not know you had it in you to write like that

WOW!!!!! that was really good! i would have picked out a part that i liked but i liked it all.. good job! I liked it. ok I'm done now
well 5/5 always
Kate~

Take that! you pessimist dogs, a very spirited poem. i give it two phalanges up. i also would like to award it with the el tocino award, one of the highest awards in my salvo of poetic mastery. hugs and kisses pizza boy

This is amazing. I love how the style and the flow work togther to create this beautiful masterpiece. Very powerful meaning behind these words. Nice work. Shanik