This is different. I think I am kind of bias when I read this so try not to take what I say personally. I didn't really get a strong message out of that except thanx you god. which is kind of repeative. I liked the 3rd stanza though, cause I belive I would have done the same thing. Saved everyone but not creating everyone in the first place. Different work, but very strong in your opinion and for that I'm gonna give u a 5 |
This is a very nice poem.. and grateful.. but it just doesnt read like a a poem to me.. it sounds more like a prayer |
by Tricky Daze
It's really good and beatifully written i think,you did a good work,5/5 |
by Cindy
This is a wonderful poem. |
by Rachel RTVW
What a sweet message.Good job! |
by Corinne
Nicely written |