Suicide

by Jenni   Feb 4, 2007


Crush the pain that burns inside,
Show every cut and bruise you hide.
The knife as it cuts your skin,
shoves away the pain within.
The blood seeps from your wrists,
you're crying as you clutch your fists.
Wipe away the blood no more.
You can't hide under shirts anymore.
Every day you go through the same pain,
but losing your sanity is all that's gained.
Stop going through the suffering,
live on, and let go of everything.
It's too late now, just don't cry.
It's your own fault if you commit suicide.

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I wrote this when I was 13 for a friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    Very strong poem i really like it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The flow is a little off, but an amazing poem! i really liked it. wel done hun.
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Yes well portrayed...
    your friend is lucky to have you. i hope everything went okay...
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by S.L.T.T.E.

    Awesome poem! Extremly impressive for a 13 yr old. you get a 5/5. I'm adding you to my favorites list

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow you have a great talent, wonderful job, great flow and wording 5/5