Hmmmm maybe im dense but i have a hard time keeping up with who is the one talking. cute poem all the same.

Haha nice I like it,

Ver good and very funny, love to read more of your poetry

I liked this alot. Very cute and funny. The story was quite humorous. Had fun deciphering the roles in words. I suppose it could be confusing to some but I thought it brought something to the message in the story.

^^I can show you twenty seven different levels of Hell
Hmmm, I once lived in Cleveland, seems you did as well?
Well thanks for your offer, so charming and kind,
But our stars don't match, we're quite different signs
And I've had demon lovers writhing in bed
Who turned out to be snakes who messed with my head
I've seen things in this room that would bring men to tears
So your dangerous delights hold me no fears

I think these have to be some of the greatest lines in your poetry. I laughed so hard and have enjoyed your poetry. The flow was amazing, everything seemed as though it was perfectly rhymed. I love rhyme schemes by the way. However the rhyme scheme did not seem forced at all. Great job 5/5
Dixie

I really like the way this is put together the poem rolls off the tounge very nicely and is laced really well in descriptive words and I love the ending, very funny.

Not only is this intelligently funny, I think it's a song...

With one glass eye, a botox smile and a tarantula named Harold
^^^
Lmaooo I loved this line!

Quite a creative tale you've woven here Mr.John. Quite an enjoyable read and some very interesting imagery you've painted here.