Comments : When Death Approaches

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is really good even if it is short! i loved the way you worded everything!
    Nice job!!! 5/5
    *kaila*

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! i love this poem......great job...5/5...

  • 17 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    Its short but u say so much i like it alot thnkx 4 the comment too

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Nice poem I like it.