I really liked this poem. I like seeing different styles I haven't seen before. I thought this was a great write! 5/5

marcella

I loved this!
I thought it was very creative, and the first few lines had me hooked.
I loved the wording, it really captured me.
You did a wonderful job on this.

An enjoyable read.. the lines were filled with great word choice.. but i think because the lines were so long some of the rhymes were missed.. from line to line.. however the rhymes within just one line were heard fine... also i think in this line

"A conspiracy of tall tale's and lies, a place we do not go, were no other confide"

that you meant

"A conspiracy of tall tale's and lies, a place we do not go, WHERE no otherS confide"

The structure was nice, the rhythm too was nice, and i loved the flow. the flow was beautiful,and the words fit it.

Personally I do not care for Triolet's. I really didnt get this one either but considering I was hard on you on the ohter ones I'll spare you one. I thought the flow was really good. So I'll give ya a 5/5.

Very smooth!