Very nicely written, however there are a very spelling mistakes...

This line, "to yet anther fight" should be, "to yet another fight"

This line, "got worse and exterm" should be, "got worse and exterme"

This line, "noone could hear" should be, "no one could hear"

This line, "see what happends" should be, "see what happens"

I advice you to use the spell check when submitting a poem. Other than that, the poem was very well written, the flow was good as well as the structure.

Peace, Joe