by Curry Feb 4, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She sits in a dark empty room, |
by Melpomene
I liked this poem although i found the ryhme to be a little forced like it didnt flow naturally from you like it has in other poems. But well done none the less. a great effort~mel |
by Dee
I like this poem. the only thing i would suggest is that you dont push the rhyme as much. otherwise that, this poem in very good |
by malina
Wow ^o^ |
by Michelle18
Wow! this one is good...is this the one you read to me on the phone? |