by Hannah Emellia Feb 4, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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The light just seems to dull now, |
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I love it, I think it was awesome. You're a great poet. |
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I really liked this poem, and I think the first stanza was my favorite. It was jagged and piecey, which I think added to the characters charm. This poem had a great flow, and the character seemed lost but not lost...if you know what I meant. Anyway, I loved it. Great work. |
by Cooper
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Bloody amazing! A very powerful dark poem. |
by Tormented
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WOW! Excellent poem! |
by Poetvoices
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This poem flowed very nicely, and it paints the picture well... |