Woah, this is a very pretty poem
"When you feel your heat beat miss
Thats when you no youv felt the passion of a kiss"
I love that line so much, its deep. keep it up!

vanèssa

Holy crap dude i read other poems of urs and damn ur poems seem perfect haha keep it up dude its cause of u i keep trying 2 make my writings better because if u can do it anyone really can just set ur heart 2 it keep it up

"You feel so loved and you just stared
And everything else has disappeared
When you feel your heat beat miss
Thats when you no youv felt the passion of a kiss"

This was very touching. Beautiful poem.

Wow this is really good its very touching You can really write good poems. Its really amazing I give it 5/5

Laura

THIS IS A GREAT POEM..

I THINK THAT ITS TRU AND FULL OF LOVE AND NO HATE..LOL..(I THINK IT MAKES SENCE).. AND ALSO ONE OF THE BEST IVE READ!!..

Wow--u r soo passanate..haha

That is what u call apssionate poem, i love it. 10/10 ur a the best writter i have ever know keep it up xxtake carexx xmwahx

DAMN DAMN DUDE......oh my GOD this poem put tears in my eyes......aww man im just speechless.....all i got to say it reminds me of me and my ex....ILOVEYOURPOEMS:)
BEST OF BEST 100%COOL........
50/50 KEEP IT UP:)
("You feel so loved and you just stared
And everything else has disappeared
When you feel your heat beat miss
Thats when you no youv felt the passion of a kiss") I LOVE THIS PART