Wrong

by Dark Savior   Feb 5, 2007


I know that I'm fortunate don't get me wrong
I have my Health, Youth, Others only have a song
They watch others around them die
Or milked of blood until they're dry

This isn't going to open your eyes or change opinions
it's to let them know we understand their minions
Please don't take what I say literal
don't cry for him, cry for a fatherless girl

We only see what others want us to see
Even my opinion is Biast; don't listen to me
Soldiers come home from the war exhausted
Trying to pick up their lives; not knowing they lost it

IF you want the really sad poem
Look at the soldiers as they come home

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    They watch others around them die
    Or milked of blood until they're dry

    my favourite lines.. touched me in a weird way.. you really do have a way with words.

    your poem made me think about putting things in perspective a little bit. awesome work.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Hm.
    Darn war.

    Well done.

    "Or milked of blood until their dry"
    *they're

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Brilliant and unique 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very very nice, Very sab poem, Speaks with alot of emotion, Nice work =)