Hmmm, i could guess from where this one is coming but i must admit.....u r one best writer on this site as the passion i see in ur work....is hard to find.

Loved it all the way

all the best and take care

Really great poem and like Kerry said, you're really a talented writer.
Loved it.

Cindy this is so sad.....hope you soon feel like smiling again....love you...Debbie

Cindy, WOW u are a amazing writer from your poems i can tell you have seen a lot of the world can you plz help me i just lost my 1st true love and there is no way of getting him back i need a way to deal i bled and cried tooooo long now i am not only scarred from my heart but as well as my wrist i look forward to reading your poems everyday after skl....thanx
~inpain~

Good write solid flow. 5/5 from me.

The answer is you will never get over such a loss, but your friends and family are here to help you through, knowing he is watching over you, knowing he wants you to go on a live a happy life is what i'm sure he is wishing for you.

Beautiful, loving write to John.
something special ......

10! nah! off the chart...again!!

This is a wonderful and deep poem!!! 5/5

I know ths feeling. Great poem.

Deep, meaningful and loving.
Your words touch me always.
take care
your friend, Tara-Kay

Aww, i loved this poem, its amazing, the title is what drew me to it. i hope if this poem is about yourself that life gets better, life has its bumps as does a dirt road, but after traveling a while the road goes flat and smooth, run down. I feel the same of life, keep traveling, life goes on. Comment mine sometime!

Depressing & Flat-out Amazing
Cindy, hun.
Your talent is simply fantastic. & your sadness is heartbreaking. The emotions portrayed let's the reader see inside your heart for a little while. The poem was just 'wow'. Couldn't get any better. Keep writing. =] 5/5

Stay strong....
Stephanie Lynn .+.

YEAH I KNOW MY MOTHER JUST GOT DUMPED AFTER 14 YEARS AND IS STILL TAKING IT ALOT HARDED THAN I FIGURED IT WOULD BE. BUT THATS LIKE HALF OF HER LIFE DOWN THE DRAIN.

Cindy cindy cindy..

how i explain you in my words that this poem is the best poem which relates exactly to me.
Can't stop thinking of you
Still hear your voice calling
Every thought I have is you
Feeling myself slowly falling

i still cnt stop thinking about her. and never will. but may be at that day when the angel of death will come and take my sould from this mortal life. may be at that day i will forget about her to who i love her allot. anyways
very nicely done.... you are favourite writer. i mso happy after reading your all poems.. plz keeep writing always. and may you live long take care.

Wow i really can relate so well with this poem

Wow you are really an amazing writer! never ever stop writing poems!=]

This was is so increidbly sad, yet so beautifully written.
The opening was perfect and the rest of the poem got better.
Such a pleasure ro read.