Awww made me cry..... this is really sad poem.

Absolutely fantastic.i love your poems .it tells the story well ......very sad too well done 5/5

Crabs and crumpets
This is excellent poem. I love that u did this poem, expressing her feelings of lossing her love that finally she could take no more and took her own life. It is sad that I can see something like this happening, a couple leaving this world because of broken hearts leaving nothing behind except letters expressing their love of one another. It is sooooo sad.

Oh, that was so sad yet very well written.
Thanks for your comments.

Excellent write. So sad grabbed me right by the heart. It is so hard to lose someone you love. Great job!

5/5 - I think everyone else has pretty much said it all - good piece!

Wow. My only word is wow. It flowed so easily, worked so well and conveyed so much meaning. The perfect counterpart to the other piece. Such strong feelings of love, pain, anger, and sadness come through this write enhancing it beautifully. Extraordinary job. *5/5

WoW... is all i can say, your trully gifted at this =) love your writing style!

Almost made me cry, but i cudnt cos ppl can see me :) otherwise it wud have lol. lovely poem!

Wow, that's a beautiful poem. I am speechless. It's just...wow!

Damm gurl !!! Good poem. lovin how detailed u are n i feel ya if i had someone so close in my heart i would give anything to be with them forever.
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In your last written words you told me
That your love would remain forever
In my last words I'm telling you
We're always going to be together.''

wow. so truely feelings described. you can write very well. such a nice poem but sad also. gr8 work

now i am going to add you in my favourites.

Very good poem!! its sad and again, almost made me cry.l. 5/5

Your poem is simply amazing. I love the way you expressed you love for him in words. Im in love with this story!! keep writing poems like this. Im excited to read more

Your poem is amazing i like the way you express your love for him.i am also in love with sumbody n wishing that i could be wit them but n e ways i really like your poem i thought it was WONDERFUL.Keep up the good work

Wow, girl you writing is seriouly outstanding, i wish i could write like this, you have a way with words and they are like so ahmazing!! is this like a real story? it has so much feeling in it! i can't get over it! its so0o0o0o good!!! i LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH!!

Aww... A sad poem but its a wonderful poem. 5/5! I love it

That was soo good. Perfect ending to such a sadly wonderful poem about love. 5/5

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