This poem goes deeper than it appears to at first glance. Your first line, especially, ("contort your mind and soul," I think it was) is easier to understand in the context of the whole piece. Once I understood what the poem was about, that line was very effective. Very sad, how this can and does actually happen to people. You'll want to fix how the site messed up your apostrophe in that one spot. Also, go through and check your "yours." There are several places where you meant it as in "you are," and so those should be "you're." (Like: "you're a body to be used," for example.) Besides that, though, I didn't see a problem. Good job!

Hey nice, I like it =)