Crabs and crumpets
Wow did u each take a character and wrote it that way or what? Anyway this is awesome! I loved it. It gave me shivers up my spine.
Excellently written, great job you two.

Really really good ... I think it is strong to describe both sides, the girl and the man.. that makes the poem really dark .. great job

Oh i liked it dnt kno where it came from but i culd feel da emotion it kinda sacred me but i liked it 5/5

Wow I loved this your such a great writer! If you have any tips I'm up for listening! shop_queen1@hotmail.com but n/e ways I loved the poem 5/5
*kaila*

Wow, that was excellant. Showing it from two points of views was brilliant. You two are great writers. 5/5 Keep it up.

Wow this is a really extraordinary piece. It shows both sides in clear description, but without making it drag on too long. Perfect flow and cadence adds to this already spectacular piece. Wonderful work. *5/5

Wow, very powerful poem, I enjoied reading it. It came out really good, usually Collaborations are hard to do, but the two of you made it look easy. Wonderful job.

Peace, Joe

Wow!
This was an excellent write. I loved the way you had the thoughts of both victim and attacker. Held my interest the whole time. 5/5

Great poem, love it, 5/5, Alot of people vote you bad just cause your on the top list.. my poem is down to 4.4, this truely desearves a 5 though, Great work

Sad to think that some people get off on stuff like this - seems to be happening more these days (god I sound old! haha!) - back to the point - you guys did a great job getting across both sides to the story - the fear and the adrenaline rush this poor girls fate brought about.

Wow! that gave me shivers that went right up my spine! AWESOME POEM!!!

WOW! that was one of the best peoms i ever read its so crazy but at the same time beatiful. I JUS REALY LOVED IT!!!

WOW! that was one of the best peoms i ever read its so crazy but at the same time beatiful. I JUS REALY LOVED IT!!!

Wow this poem was just magnificent it was so wonderfully written it took my breath away there was so much emotion in it wow is all i can say very good if i could rate above a 5 i definitly would 5/5

Hahahahahahahahahahaha.

LMFAO Look at the comments Brattney.. everyone LIED to us lmaoooo

HAHAHA yeah they did, oh my.