Beautiful yet sad. I can relate to your feelings but in a diffrent sense. I know what is like to need these feelings. Great job on your poem. Take care Cindy

I know wut you mean with this poem. Ive fallen so hard for the 1 im with that i dnt think i cud ever bear losing h im. But sumtimes i do wonder how long it will last n if i will be able to keep him. You portray just how much love can consume a person. A vry passionate poem, definately 5*s.

I loved this!
I found it to be so sweet yet also very sad at the end.
You did a great job with this.

Hey thatwas really nice. there was also some aspects to it. beautifully worded. loved it. xx

Tell him!!!
This is blinding love.....
Very impressive write......

Beautiful honey!!!! keep them coming.x

Wow dead on my mood right now! nice work! I loved this poem 5/5
*kaila*

This one of prolly the best poems i've read! its too fall in love with sum1 who doesn't or can't love u back! i know what u meant in the poem, i feel the same way!

Hey just wanted to say that this poem is really good
i really liked the way it was put together any way jsut wanted to say great job

Congratulations, I started to cry. My emotions fell over me, I really really really love this poem.

There is not much you can do if you are so much in love. Very beautiful poem. I loved it.

Hey Romantic! That poem was really good and I can relate to this pretty well. keep writing and I hope to see more of your work!!!

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD LOL I FEEL HE SAME WAY U DO WITH MA 1ST LOVE BUT REMEBER LIFE GOES ON

WOW THAT WAS SO DEEp..i loved the approach the whole question thing it really makes your reader think. thats an amazing choice of style and what originaliy. i love it you're very talented.

melissa

I can so identify with this....how sad.
Well written.....full of felling and longing...5/5 Debbie

What do you do when you just need to hear "I love you"
When that's all you really have left to hold onto

the second last line really made me go awwww. this was magical. wonderful. you can really describe love. well done. i respect you.

5/5 always, David