I THiNK THiS iS REALLY CUTE..

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i LiKE iT.. AL0T

Hey thanks for the comment! :) I added u to my favs so i could comment u back when u submit some poems.. :)

This one was a good poem. I rly liked it! Keep up the good work! :)

Can't wait to read ur new ones !! :) <3

"Do you care if I'm Sad!?
Do you care if I'm Mad!?
Do you think I'll Miss?
Do you think I'll be Kissed!?"
~you should change miss to Missed
and
"Do you care if I Die!?
Do you care if I Cry!?
Do you die if I Cry!?
Do you cry if I Die!?"
~Will you die if i cry
~Will you cry if i die.

its a really good poem. just little things like that bug me.
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