L.O.V.E!

by Dado   Feb 5, 2007


Lake of betrayel
Ocean of tears
Valley of lies and fears
Endless sorrow

WHY!!?
u wanted to hurt me obviously
well...
congratulations u succeeded

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, I really enjoyed this piece and I feel if the ending part was taken off this could be a wonderful but saddening acrostic of love.
    It can hurt like hell at times.

    All the best, Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Dancer of your dreams

    Wonderful job its how i feel about my ex its like he set out to hurt me....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    I really like this one and i dont see why it doesnt have a better rateing..(:

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