The same thing with me. NIce poem 5/5

Very good poem curry, loved the flow, besides a couple grammer mistakes its perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Good poem...i like it=]....

but i think you meant for the word "can" to be cant in this line...

"But I can do this anymore so I'm gonna let you see,"

but other than that nice job.5/5