This is my life a cycle but I try to move on. Nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Oh.. this is soo sad.. but i really enjoyed reading it.. great joB!

Good job on your write. Keep writing! Take Care Cindy

Very nice. Deep, emotion filled. A sad and poigant write. Nice job on this piece. *5/5

Another sad poem! write a happy poem damn it! lol...but this was great!

luv ya!

~michelle~

Eh, this poems seems awful forced. don't worry so much about rhyme. 5/5 in any case.