Why me!

by Independence Forever   Feb 5, 2007


Why all this talk?
what is this walk?

why can't i see?
what am i to be?

will i ever love?
some sweet dove?

why all this haste?
it's only a big waste

why am i me?
where is she?

who is to blame?
why is it my shame?

where is that bell?
the one that can tell

where is your heart?
lost from the very start

who are you depriving?
when you should be striving

all is a deficading lie
you are evily clever and sly

can't you seem the dam breaking?
no, you started it, stop faking

is it death you are faning
the good in you is forever waning

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  • 17 years ago

    by angelbabygirl

    Hey I love this poem and it is very well written. So my poem makes you feel old? Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    It's only a big waste
    dont think its a waste i liked this one i think its my fav.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Awesome! I like how you questioned so many things...and gave an answer at the end...very nice...Def. 5/5! *I'll check out more of your poems again...you are talented*
    -Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Great expression of your emotions i like

  • 18 years ago

    by Briana

    I really liked the line "Can't you see the dam breaking?". It was a good expression of how you felt when you wrote this.

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