I really liked the line "Can't you see the dam breaking?". It was a good expression of how you felt when you wrote this.

Great expression of your emotions i like

Awesome! I like how you questioned so many things...and gave an answer at the end...very nice...Def. 5/5! *I'll check out more of your poems again...you are talented*
-Amanda

It's only a big waste
dont think its a waste i liked this one i think its my fav.

Hey I love this poem and it is very well written. So my poem makes you feel old? Keep up the good work.