That was really good
nice rhyming

Great poem!!thanx for your comments.it means alot coming from someone who's poetry and ratings are excellent thanx x

First off thanks for the comment on my poem.. i really appreciate it.. =) This poem is amazing and sadly it happens to so many of us.. an amazing poem! keep them coming you're an amazing poet..

Tell him!!!!!!!

Great job! The imagery was great, the flow was great. Kept my interest the whole time. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Wow. this is really good. I like how you incorporated a story into the whole poem, and actually ended up talking about yourself, Cinderella, and your feelings, all at once.

That takes great skill. definitely 5/5 from me. Keep it up

Oh my gosh i absolutly love this one of yours, its fantasic, such a dreamland where magic can happen, its lovely excellent my dear.

This is really great. I'm in the same situation, we should get together and devise a plan! I'm head over heels for my ex, still, and people say he is too, for me. I've tried everything, you know..everything, to make him say how he feels, but ya..he doesn't.
You should do whatever you can to make this work out between you and him. Don't lose him, if he means that much to you, it hurts alot, I know..!
You just gotta make him see he can't live without you. and I am working on that plan right now....!

Good luck!

This poem was truely amazing.<3

Aww I loved it!!! Nice job love is amazing at times

This is Claude you can access my poems through my name. They are still not as high quality as yours though love this poem Im still in aw 0.0, you have a unique talent :)