Ima stop caring about you

by me   Feb 5, 2007


Ima stop caring about you
and i got the right reasons to
everytime i try not to care
but these feelings is kinda rare
tell me why you is in my heart
almost at the top of the chart
special to me in every kind of way
and let me just say
ima care less for u every single day
even if i have to try to stay away ok
cause caring about you
is something i dont wanna do
and ima stop doing even if
i care a lot about you
so lets see what it do

~comment my poem plz nd b honest~

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  • 17 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Good effort...you have deep feelings and passions yearning to come out....keep it up and you will get there ...a good friend of mine said onece " consistancy of paractice is the secret to success" so keep on practicing this art...also, plz read my recent poems"Arabian sands "crown of thorns""my tears" vote and comment thanks you so much

  • 17 years ago

    by me

    Thx 4 da comments nd honesty =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    I did enjoy this poem, but you wanted honesty. So here's a couple tips for you:

    -Watch your grammar. You mixed up 'is' and 'are' in a few places, and there were some other parts that weren't really correct. If you spell everything out in regular English, rather than slang, then perhaps it will be easier for you.

    -The content was slightly repetitive. I'd suggest trying out some metaphors, and maybe use some imagery to make it a little more interesting.

    Great effort though, seriously. With a little work you'll be writing like a pro! haha. But seriously, I found this to be an enjoyable poem, and your feelings were very clearly stated. Nice job. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lilninja

    I liked it, it was really nice.

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