Awwwww sweet and adorable and to the point. Very lovely =] I liked it. Keep it up!!

--Mel =]

I felt you repeted a little too much, cut down on repeating that much and it would turn out really good I believe, don't get me wrong the repetition was good, but it was too much. Overall good Job.

Peace, Joe

Wow, I really know what you mean. Good job, Issabelle!!