I can relate to the feelings in this poem and you told it extremely well, especially from the view of the child
Keep it up Charisma!
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, this is so true and sometimes people get so caught up in this, that they forget about the effect on their children. Very well written.

I can relate to this, not that my parents fought alot, but they did broke up.. anyway an amazing poem5/5

Wow. i wanna cry.. that was so strong. im all watery. *sniff* its beautifully written.

You both were at the first?

i think you should remove the word the.

again- BEAUTIFUL!