Hey! I like this but i think in some places the rhyme seems forced.

'that makes all bad things scat'
'God's ban'

For your consideration
I think that the poem flows better without:
'and keeps us sane'.

but yeah the imagery is good. it has a nice rhythm to it, generally a good rhyme. It's a good piece.

Thank you for your comments. It's much appreciated.

Jemma

I really liked this. your word choice was good, but you had a few spelling errors. other than that, i thoroughly enjoyed it! 5/5