The whole man of my dreams. or in your dreams whatever.. is cliche.. its sad too because this could've been a much better poem if you took that idea out.. the flow is good and nice word choice.. not my favorite but its okay

"With an imaginary kiss as its seal"

I really love this line. Good men are hard to find, so when you do find a great one, hold on tightly, even if it's in your dreams for now.
You should check out my poem called "Flower Picking". I have a feeling you'll get what it's about, it's kinda like your poem "Roses" in a sense....so you'll get the actual meaning of my flower!

Have a great day, you're totally awesome!!

"Someday this will no longer be a reverie,
There will be a strong sweet man,
Standing with me,
So until I find a man who is as he seems,
I will see him here in my dreams."

My favorite part. I thought it was a great poem.

Hopefully one day we can all stop dreaming of our perfect person and find the one that can trully make us feel whole =) amazing as usual! 5/5

Someday this will no longer be a reverie,
There will be a strong sweet man,
Standing with me,
So until I find a man who is as he seems,
I will see him here in my dreams'
^^^
The two postings above me have made a wonderful choice in choosing their favorite part. I also love this part.

Congrats on being chosen for the "Reader's Choice Award" Courtney

Take care Hun
Luanne

Congrats on being readers choice. Excellent job! Loved this poem.

Someday this will no longer be a reverie,
There will be a strong sweet man,
Standing with me,
So until I find a man who is as he seems,
I will see him here in my dreams.

Really liked this stanza.
Take care Cindy

Congrats!! That was very pretty, and I liked it because it was so heartfelt.

His dark eyes an element that makes it a dream,
So deep and so incredibly mysterious,
A real man would have ulterior purpose,
Hurt and pain would be my gain,
So many lies under the surface

Unlike the above posts, I chose this stanza as my favorite. I liked the flow and the rhythmn of the lines. The word choices were good. Not cliched at all.

Well done, and congrats.
Jeannie

Very nice poem. It flowed nicely. the only error i found wasn't too big but it was punctuation, but then again that is up to the writer. great job. 5/5.