Um.. idk what to say..its god but not great.. some parts dont make sense

* this was an intersting poem. Very different than anything that I've ever read before on this site. The one word at the beginning of each stanza sends a very powerful message. I liked the set up the only thing I wasn't to fond of was the ending, kinda threw me off. Nice work though

I get wat ur talking bout i was good the flow was ok but i liked it 4.5/5

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I must say that it is one of my favorites of yours because of how everything came together in the end.

The only thing I would have to say, is that I cannot understand why Love is on its own line. It is not one of the words that you used to begin your stanzas with, so I felt that it was inappropriately put as such.

otherwise. the poem was grand!
5/5