by The Lonely Rose Feb 6, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Little voice! Little Voice! |
by Cella Bella
Great piece. Unique structure, I really liked it. Umm... The last word intsead of "said", try spoken maybe. Just an opinion. you've got talent for taking alot of emotion and puting it all in a great poem. 5/5 |