by Weeping Wolf Feb 6, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Hide and Sink |
Wow that piece was so strong, Hide and Sink |
Hey, Laylawolf-This is really excellent and quite a departure from your usual style. The emotion and original images are there as it the meaning and milieu.It has a vague minimilast feel to it and a strong sense of the surreal.But the style you wrote it in works wonderfully. It is good to see you grow and expand, I swear you get better with every poem-and you were fantastic long ago! I also like the amiguity, as in people can interpret this different ways just as emotionful and with meaning as it meant to you on another level. Again, your fantastic and unique use of language and such vivid images and the way you communicate still shine though the style/form only adds to aa excellent piece, and a growth point in your work.You are truly a master who only gets better. Keep experimenting! Write on! |
by Unrequited
Wow... do you have any idea how similar this is to my style??? The only difference is that you are sooo much better at it! This poem... really spoke to me. The emotion, it fills this piece through and through. It is sad... but I looove it. |
by Dark Demise
Very nice! a new style of poem I love it =D |
by Dark Demise
Nice,nice, =) |