Wow this is sad and kinda happy all at once..you are a very talented writer...

I really like this one, while i was reading it in my head it was rhyming in my head. i love it because its try. from my point of view anyways

Wow this is wonderful. You did a really good job on this one. it had a great message to remind cutters not to cut too deep. I can relate to this. Very well written. 5/5 keep up the good work

The extreme shortness of these verses make it have an excellent rhythm. Definitely easy to read and follow. Powerful meaning. I loved the slight twist at the end. For me, it's very easy to relate to. 5/5

Wow, this was really good. I loved how you kept it simple yet it contained so much depth. There were a few awkward spots where the flow wasn't too good but overall it worked well. The descriptions were good and the emotion was clear. Nicely done 5/5

I liked how you showed a down fall and a rise from it .. and your poem is very blunt I love it though! good job 5/5

I liked the ending.. very powerful if only everyone who was a self harmer would stop and get some help because they realised that their life was so precious. I liked how you repeated that one line at the beginning of every stanza it made it stand out and it was something that I dont see to often in poem that I read on here anymore. This poem is much better than I thought it would be I'm really glad it wasnt the typical cutting poem. nice write.

Wow if anyone can make a poem so short and simple and makes it yet so powerful its you lol.. you have a really good creative side of you and I hope you never forget that.. good job and keep up the good work 5/5

Wow amzing poem i can relate to this ome much comment some of my poems plz

kylle

This one is good. Pretty emotional and well written. Short yet simple. Nice job :]

This was really good the word choice was simple yet powerful, the emtion was amzingly deep. and the flow was flawless. Perfectly penned, well written, excellent read 5/5 for you deserve nothing less

I liked this.
it was fast, and effective and really deep, made me think. its quick, just like a cut. which is brill cause thats what u were writing about.
loved it.
well done
please comment my latest called "your subconsious choir" thanks chick :) take care, keep writing =]
xoxox

I liked this poem.It was short and right to the point.Great job.

Kelsie

Awesome poem 5/5
i just dont know what to say other then its amazeing

Your poem brings back memories, and it made me look at my scars.... shame on you j/k

i love your poem its a 5

Wow! it's like i feel indentified with your poem. i know how it feels, it's just the life seems difficult sometimes, but in the end, you never have the courage to end it. Wow, your poem has make me think =P take a loo through my poems n_n

Wow! i loved this poem, it was well written , and had a great flow. i loved your stana
'"Slit a wrist
Watch it bleed
It's all you want
And all you need"i like the way the ending becomes more posistive, almost like a message to poeple that they can stop .. and its not always too lat! really well written

xXx

I thought this was a GREAT POEM

it was very powerful
and there was alot of emotion

and it does bring back memories

but i thought it was a well written poem

a well deserved, 5/5

Wow a unique piece I have come through. The repitition is nice and having a lucid function. Simple but great 5/5 all the way

Fsams

Great poem
5/5