Aw this poem was so sweet. Its so hard to lose a friend. And I can just feel how much you loved this person. The only thing I can correct on is, in the 2nd last stanza it says "foreverr" you only need one r.. I know its just a typo but I thought I'd let u know.

The story is so tragic, and I believe that the fact that it is real gives it a stronger impact on the people who read it. wonderfully written, 5/5