Double death -- suicide

by Marina   Feb 6, 2007


Double death, Suicide...

Is it wrong to ask him to die with me? He said that he loved me, why... Why can't I ask him to die with me...
I know its selfish and I know its wrong, but I've been alone all along.

Why should i have to die alone.

Maybe he doesn't have to die. Maybe he can stay with me, hold me, while we lye. Cry with me, I wonder, would he?.

Is he man enough to bid me farewell...To send me; to condemn me to hell...

It will be slow and painless, unlike how I'd always planned. I'll over dose, a simple and clean ordeal.

Will he stay with me..Stay with me, till' I'm gone? What will he do when he's alone?

I don't want to do it alone. I'm tired of being alone...
-Marina.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cobrey

    I would stay with you and i would die with you.

  • 17 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow. the way you express things is breathtaking. i hope ur not considering this. your a great poet and im sure a great person. this poem was harsh and yet at the saeme time so sorrowful it could not be harsh. i dont no. thats how i saw it. also the thing with the other poem, i no it doesnt mean much as it has already happened, but im sorry it did, i think ur a very strong person to have been able to live throught it. take care. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    This is so great... almost like a diary entry but it flows so well. i love it. well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    You express your emotion and thoughts well good job

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