by The Queen of Spades Feb 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
It's like driving down the dark and winding road |
by Anime Lover
Wow! I am speechless.......... I could picture what you were writing in my head it was really neat. your poem is so well put. The flow of your words are awesome. Keep writing=) |
Very well written, the flow was good, however I felt the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Other than that wonderful poem. |
by kiesha
Wow. You most definitely have a way with words. I felt as if I was right there in the car. The imagery it created and that I saw in my mind was beautiful. I really like this poem of yours. Wonderfully done. |
by angelina
... goooood i havent read anything like this ... you grasped my attetion and kept me interested all the way through it |