... goooood i havent read anything like this ... you grasped my attetion and kept me interested all the way through it

Wow. You most definitely have a way with words. I felt as if I was right there in the car. The imagery it created and that I saw in my mind was beautiful. I really like this poem of yours. Wonderfully done.

Very well written, the flow was good, however I felt the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Other than that wonderful poem.

Peace, Joe

Wow! I am speechless.......... I could picture what you were writing in my head it was really neat. your poem is so well put. The flow of your words are awesome. Keep writing=)