I see you

by Kaila   Feb 6, 2007


Sitting on top
of the 15 story high building
I see you everywhere
I'm looking

I see you
In the sunset
across Berry avenue.
Were we first met

I see you
In the new forming moon
It looks the same as the night
Where we first danced to that tune

I see you
in the clouds Dissapearing above
It reminds me of the time
When we at chocolate doves

I see you
Down below in the street
I remember that day
When you brushed me off my feet

I see you
In the lights on the cars so fast
It reminds me of my heart
when you kissed me last

I see you
In my eyes when I look at these things
It reminds me sometimes
of all the memories

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Yeh this is true love. that i felt in your poem it was such a great poem that i read today.. wihs you good luck taek care 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is an adorable poem... filled with emotion... i love the idea of you seeing him or being reminded of memories with him in your eyes... or everything you look at.. very clever.. the flow was perfect... the rhyming was good... some a little simple but it didnt hurt the poem in the least

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I see that this poem has a secret meaning for you. those memories will always be with you, hold onto them. let there be love

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Great work 5/5 keep it up...you write pretty good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Thats so sweet! i like this one.

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