Wow great again! loved the emotion you put in this! i could really relate:) 5/5 keep up the great work |
by Michelle18
Thats so sweet! i like this one. |
by *Isolde*
Great work 5/5 keep it up...you write pretty good. |
by David
I see that this poem has a secret meaning for you. those memories will always be with you, hold onto them. let there be love |
Aww.. this is an adorable poem... filled with emotion... i love the idea of you seeing him or being reminded of memories with him in your eyes... or everything you look at.. very clever.. the flow was perfect... the rhyming was good... some a little simple but it didnt hurt the poem in the least |
by Boy
Yeh this is true love. that i felt in your poem it was such a great poem that i read today.. wihs you good luck taek care 5/5 |