by Katlynn Feb 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I let every boy take my heart. |
by Ike Dizzle
This is a very good poem. I like the way you did your stanzas (4,3,3,4,3,3). It's unique. 5/5 |
It was nice, but you changed from saying Me, to She quite a bit. I liked the 4 lined stanza then 2, 3 lined stanza set-up, though! |
by xX-jess-Xx
It was really heartfelt, the rhythm was a bit iffy at times but other than that it was lovely! |
V cool. i like it. |
This was a very wonderful poem. You wrote it so...truthfully. I understand how this feels and you did and awesome job of putting it into words. Great job! |