Oh mi gosh!! I loved this...it makes perfect sense, and it has deep meaning. You didn't hide anything, as in twist it and try to make it very figurative languagishy...And its perfect that way. Very straight forward yet still very powerful. Loved it... although I hope it isnt true and you're actually going through this >.

This is a sad poem, and really strong.. Good work!

5/5 this is beauty Matt... plane and simple beauty..... Matt.... I found love............ I found you...
-Marina