Waterfalls (Triolet)

by Gem   Feb 6, 2007


Thundering down the mountain side
So powerful yet so beautiful
Bask in the splendour it provides
Thundering down the mountain side
A never-ending rushing tide
Is this much beauty possible?
Thundering down the mountain side
So powerful yet so beautiful ©

*Gem*

(I needed to write something... i haven't in so long.. this was so hard when you just don't feel inspired anymore.)

(Triolet. The first line repeats on the fourth and seventh. The second line repeats on the eighth. The ryhme scheme goes like this; ABaAabAB. (only two rhymes are used)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Well, for not having insperation or anything, you really pulled off this short poem very well! the detailing really painted a picture of the waterfall...amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Another great poem. You are talented. Good choice of words. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This had beautiful emotion and imagery packed into a short poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Lovely and thoroughly engaging....I can see it.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is nice job.

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