Wonderful. I think you need to get your butt writing though! lol I miss reading your poems! Great job on this one though! Very peaceful...
xoxo

It was very pretty Gem! So sorry you haven't been doing well. Your inspiration will return! Nice job!
Charisma*

This is so beautiful once again :)! I always love your work...I was wondering what happened to yah. So sorry nothing has inspired you. But keep it up...everyone experiances writer's block now and then :)
5/5 as always! :)
~Midnight Sun

Gem,
Nice to see you back no matter what you write. It is beautiful! Thinking of you your friend Cindy

Great.. idk how u do it.. if i only had that touch of talent in writing i would love each day that passes by great work till now i'll keep working to turn into a poet as good as u are

I know it's so hard when you aren't inspired, but this was still good.

Wonderful poem, Very good. I really liked it. It wasn't a love poem, not even a dark poem. This is my favorite Nature poem.
Your Friend
Aaron

You create such a beautiful image Gem.

Thundering down the mountain side
So powerful yet so beautiful
^^^^
Uhhhh takes my breath away!
A wonderful read Gem

So powerful and yet so beautiful is ur poem....u really take all of us to another world...great write my friend

all the best and take care

Gem,

Such lovely images leap out from your words, you have done a splendid job.

Waremest regards,

Steve

Excellent job on this form. Beautifully penned with splendid imagery!

Wow this was good! I dont really know all the different kinds of poems you can write so its nice when u explain them! loved you poem though! 5/5
*kaila*

Very well written... keep it up!

It is nice job.

Lovely and thoroughly engaging....I can see it.....

This had beautiful emotion and imagery packed into a short poem.

Another great poem. You are talented. Good choice of words. 5/5

Well, for not having insperation or anything, you really pulled off this short poem very well! the detailing really painted a picture of the waterfall...amazing. 5/5