Your still alive

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Feb 6, 2007


I believe you’re still alive
Not here on earth but in a bright,
Wonderful, warm place
With no more pains and constant laughs

You’re still alive
In a place where each gem
On the crown you earned
By being who you were
Easy going, respectable,
And true each gem
On the crown you wear resembles you

Your still alive in every heart you touched
In each life you blessed
In everyone you knew
There is an everlasting piece of you

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    *Your still alive*
    The title should, instead, read *You're Still Alive*

    The internet screwed it up. * youâ??re *

    *Your * again, should be *you're*

    Well written poem. I still am trying to understand what this poem was about. I think it's about someone who is dead but is somehow still living on in your/main character's heart.

    Well written. Keep the ink flowing.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by umbra

    I like the imagery that describes the crown. It might be a bit hard for those who are not christians to understand though. The system screwed up your apostrophes so it looks like a bunch of gibberish where they belong.

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    This poem is so beautiful and moving and is so well written. My nan died a month ago and so i can really relate to it and it gives a real sense of comfort and hope. thankyou. xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is a very sad poem. it's filled with emotion and it's deep. it was wonderful. it flowed nicely too. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I absolutely loved the last verse hun. was so beautiful.

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

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