I absolutely loved the last verse hun. was so beautiful.

much love and many kisses,
bex

This is a very sad poem. it's filled with emotion and it's deep. it was wonderful. it flowed nicely too. 5/5

~Kristina

This poem is so beautiful and moving and is so well written. My nan died a month ago and so i can really relate to it and it gives a real sense of comfort and hope. thankyou. xXx

I like the imagery that describes the crown. It might be a bit hard for those who are not christians to understand though. The system screwed up your apostrophes so it looks like a bunch of gibberish where they belong.

*Your still alive*
The title should, instead, read *You're Still Alive*

The internet screwed it up. * youâ??re *

*Your * again, should be *you're*

Well written poem. I still am trying to understand what this poem was about. I think it's about someone who is dead but is somehow still living on in your/main character's heart.

Well written. Keep the ink flowing.

5/5
~Stephen White