Sharing A Love

by Italian Stallion   Feb 6, 2007


Here I am
Sharing a love
That I thought
Would last forever

Comforting you
Holding you close
When troubled times
Are near

Your love for me
Is fading away
Trying to stay strong
For you I am

You're the one
That makes me happy
And the one that even
Makes me cry

You are there
Through my troubled times
But in the end
Your love for me is faded

Here I am
Sharing a love
That I thought
Would last forever

But overtime
It's slipping away
And I just don't know
What to do or say

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephie

    Oh, wow. So simple yet so moving. Is this from your personal experience at the moment? If so I definately know where you are coming from and how it feels as I'm there right now myself.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Emotional and well written, I enjoyed it very much

  • 17 years ago

    by **MIMI**

    I felt the pain in this poems, the words you chose to express the emotions were great. Lovely work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by winterseve28

    One of the worst feelings ever; loving someone and knowing they are falling out of love with you, and there is absolutely nothing you can do about it. Beautifully written. It made mt heart sad. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sad & Beautiful.
    A wonderfully written poem by an amazing writer.
    You capture the readers attention at the very beginning & hold us all the way through.
    You ended the poem perfectly & there were no flaws I could see throughout the whole poem.
    Fantastic job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn

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