Its good i like your style alot keep writing

'to be away from you is life's sad cruelty" SO true. Mackinaw island will forever hold a special place in my heart. lots of memories there!
5/5 always
your favorite friend

You described your passion as if loving a soul rather than a place. It was very beautiful. I truly admire your passion. 5/5

-Liz-
ps: thank you for your oppinion and comment.

I loved how you could describe your love for a certain place. I liked your style on this well done ~mel

Your style is simply amazing, i love it. the poem is awesome. the words you use are great and the imagery is perfect.
5/5

nikki