by eXile Feb 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
10 years ago had a spark, but now its just boring |
Wow your a fab writer i think your poems are truely amazing you must love your babi girl she sooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky :D xxx alex xxx |
5 [[excellent]] loved it. =] especially the ending. =] good job. |
by Animus
You have a way with words. |
by Espoirfailed
Wow, this was messed up and haunting the last two lines really shocked me and provoked real emotion, from such simple lines you have perfected the whole poem, well done |