The Good Die Young - Verse One

by eXile   Feb 6, 2007


10 years ago had a spark, but now its just boring
Its been a long time, but Im still mourning
Walking through the dead streets with the rain pouring
Waiting for that clear day to see your wings soaring
But that day aint coming, not since youve been away
A few was lost and another just past away
We should increase the love, cuz we re losing the family
Everyone around mes dropping as Im screaming in agony
I cant stop staring and I cant talk
Cause I see fire on a tree with blood on the sidewalk
I cant even open my mouth, Im just speechless
Im completely tripping, like what the hell was I seeing
I turn over and see my girlfriend still sleeping
Paranoid, I reach over, thank God, shes still breathing

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow your a fab writer i think your poems are truely amazing you must love your babi girl she sooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky :D xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5 [[excellent]] loved it. =] especially the ending. =] good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Animus

    You have a way with words.
    Nice,
    -Animus

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Wow, this was messed up and haunting the last two lines really shocked me and provoked real emotion, from such simple lines you have perfected the whole poem, well done