Lost everything

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Feb 6, 2007


I don't know how to feel.
Everyone is telling me
Do this, be like this, act like this.
The only thing I knew
Was taking away rom me
The blade was my only comfort
And now all I have is everyone wanting to "know" me
I DON"T EVEN KNOW MYSELF!
All the things I have known have been ripped away from me.

Rachel

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    People should let us be who we want to be

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    An emotional poem you have here. I found this to be short with a good meaning behind it. I didn't really like the capitals though they seemed to throw me off a little when reading it. The form was ok but the feelings put into this were great. Written well. Good job~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    Great poem...short sweet and too the point i love it...i can also relate to it which makes it twice as good srry for all yer troubles and shit....much love

    krysten

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    What an emotional poem, maybe not the most "perfect" composition but you have displayed feelings which, in my opinion, is far more important than following a structure or rhyming! wel done

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