Comments : Lost everything

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    What an emotional poem, maybe not the most "perfect" composition but you have displayed feelings which, in my opinion, is far more important than following a structure or rhyming! wel done

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    Great poem...short sweet and too the point i love it...i can also relate to it which makes it twice as good srry for all yer troubles and shit....much love

    krysten

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    An emotional poem you have here. I found this to be short with a good meaning behind it. I didn't really like the capitals though they seemed to throw me off a little when reading it. The form was ok but the feelings put into this were great. Written well. Good job~mel

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