My just desserts

by Independence Forever   Feb 6, 2007


I had a dream terribly wrong
so bad it could only be in a song

many people marched by
what they said, i cannot lie

they returned all my insults, all my critical comments
all that they said equaled the worst torments

i saw all my flaws, all the bad things about me
they surpassed the good things, i finally did see

my character is tattered, i fear it won't repair
i cannot do anything except perhaps despair

i hide in the corner but they still see me still
the insults they say completely break my will

they still come after hours have passed
all the people i've offended, in numbers unsurpased

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  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow. i love the meaning
    It kinda makes you think
    Great job!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its amazing! i love ur poems but this one is as close to perfect as a person can get! good job!

    yours always
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its amazing! i love ur poems but this one is as close to perfect as a person can get! good job!

    yours always
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its good, really good. but thats just my opinion. i just have one question... is it true? im just wondering because if it is u shouldnt let people bring you down, it doesnt matter what they say, its what you say. its a really good poem. i like it. good job.

    yours always,
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Ur sick!! Go see ur doctor

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